Well tried. I like the fact that you tried to include various nationalities in your introduction. That was fun. However, yet another reader. Too much mispronounced words making hard to understand what it is you want to say. You tried to use compound sentences but seeing you were not taught how, you only succeeded in lowering your possible grade. You should stick to the evil you know. The inflection in your voice is also a bit though not overly distracting. However, well tried Conray.
Well tried. I like the fact that you tried to include various nationalities in your introduction. That was fun. However, yet another reader. Too much mispronounced words making hard to understand what it is you want to say. You tried to use compound sentences but seeing you were not taught how, you only succeeded in lowering your possible grade. You should stick to the evil you know. The inflection in your voice is also a bit though not overly distracting. However, well tried Conray.
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